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PART 4: Confronting the Monster

PART 4: Confronting the Monster

Polite facades shatter under sudden interrogation.

Julian Price stepped out from the hallway into the open-concept kitchen and living room area, dressed in his crisp weekend polo shirt and polished loafers, holding two brown paper grocery bags against his chest.

He stopped dead in his tracks when he saw me standing by the sliding glass door.

His warm, welcoming smile didn't vanish instantly—it flickered, shifting for a fraction of a second into a cold, calculating mask before settling back into a practiced display of mild annoyance.

“Daniel?” Julian asked, raising an eyebrow as if he had just found an uninvited guest tracking mud onto his imported tile. “What are you doing in our house? Where is Maya?”

Elena emerged right behind him, carrying a tote bag, her face instantly draining of color when she saw me standing there with my fists clenched, panting heavily.

“Daniel? How did you get in here?” Elena gasped, her voice pitching high with panic. “Did you break the patio lock? I’m calling the police right now!”

“Save your breath, Elena,” I said, my voice dropping into a low, terrifying register that made both of them flinch. “The police are already on their way. I called them from my cell as soon as I pulled our daughter out of the dog cage you and your golden-boy husband built in the backyard.”

Julian’s face went completely rigid.

The grocery bags slipped from his grip, hitting the hardwood floor with a dull thud as a jar of imported pasta sauce cracked and leaked red liquid across the boards.

“You’re delusional,” Julian said smoothly, stepping forward with an intimidating posture designed to project absolute authority. “The child has behavioral issues. We had to secure her temporarily because she tried to bolt into traffic. You’re twisting a normal parental safety measure into something malicious.”

“A dog cage, Julian?” I snarled, taking a step toward him. “You locked a ten-year-old girl in a steel cage in the mud for seventy-three hours without food or water, and you call it a safety measure?!”

“Daddy!” Maya screamed from the couch where I had left her, cowering with her hands over her ears.

Julian’s eyes darted toward the sliding glass door behind me—toward the deep end of the swimming pool.

I saw the micro-expression of absolute horror cross his face.

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He knew what was at the bottom of that green water.

And in that split second, I knew that whatever monsters were hidden in those contractor bags, Julian Price was the architect of their silence.

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